Comments on: (LOOK HERE) American Gangster Movie Review

By: joselynm2009

joselynm2009 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:23:54 +0000

Its good but i think you need to write more about the basics and your opinion on the article rather than summarize it because it does kinda ruin pieces for the readers who havent seen it yet. Im not sure on the protocal for reviews but thats what i think.
and in this sentence…
The film illustrates Roberts’ quest to nailing Lucas it should be roberts quest to nail lucas

but overall it ws really good=D
nice hilighter shoes lol

By: alessiap2011

alessiap2011 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:21:21 +0000

This is a really well written article. It definately made me want to see it.
Towards the middle you started talking about some scenes and you got a little too detailed which made me lose you.
Was there any other static or dynamic characters?

But overall you captured the whole idea of the movie and portrayed it wholey to the reader.

By: stephanieo2011

stephanieo2011 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:20:48 +0000

hey. ok i loved the beginning lines and the end!!! veryyyy good. the middle seemed to just be a filler kind of? i think that maybe when you were writing it, you started to summarize the movie. overall youre a really good reviwer.

By: mariap2011

mariap2011 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:20:45 +0000

I LOVED IT!! it was really good

- You may want to shorten it a bit so you don’t lose the person’s attention.
- You spoiled the movie! haha
That’s all I have!

By: joselyng2010

joselyng2010 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:20:02 +0000

Good job at making it detailed.
* It seems long to read so maybe you want to put indentions or make it shorter.
3 Specific changes
*I dont see why this is necessary “and wearing an extravagant chinchilla coat his wife insisted he’d have (far from the casual and conservative suits he lives in to evade unwanted attention). ”
*Put how long the movie is
*

By: blancaj2011j

blancaj2011j — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:19:03 +0000

1. A synonym for bad guys…
2. I love the way you used the characters and actors names.
3. It’s a good article… don’t try to reveal as much information in the article, people might want to see it.

By: wendyg2011

wendyg2011 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:15:43 +0000

amaziiinnng
you made me want to see this movie.
I really like your last 2 sentences =]]]
great job
i don’t know what to say about it and how to help you specifically. Hope THIS helped. ;]

By: oscart2007

oscart2007 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:13:47 +0000

As a constant viewer of movie reviews here are some tips

1. Dont spoil anything about the movie tell only its main theme.

2. Make it shorter. My eyes glazed over a little about half way.

3. you didnt really tell me what you thout about the film, which is why i would read a review.

4. Split up into paragraphs. keep it organized

By: vanessav2o11

vanessav2o11 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:13:11 +0000

The article was goood but kinda like a summary =/ till the end at least .
also , I think you should’ve got quotes from people who saw the movie .
Thats pretty much it .

By: manuelam2011

manuelam2011 — Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:12:13 +0000

Really good article you had fun with it and that is what writing articles is all about.

MAYBE get some qoutes (just a suugestion)